Kia ora, welcome to my blog,
This week we have been writing recounts using language features. So now that we have learnt all of these language features this term we need to use them in our writing.
These are the language features we have been learning about for the past weeks:
Onomatopoeia - ‘Bang’
Metaphor - “You are the sun!’
Personification “The clouds danced across the sky.”
Hyperboles - “I was so embarrassed I would have stuck my head in the toilet to hide.”
Alliteration - “It was time for super Sunday sports.”
Dialogue - “Don’t move,” Ellenessa whispered.
So the first things we did was answer in our documents the questions: who why, what, when, where, and how. we wrote down these ideas in bullet points. Then we looked for places where we could include ur language features. We highlighted the different language features in different colours and then yesterday turned our planning into a story.
Here are some of my ideas that answer the question 'WHAT'
What?
- Fun Friday super sports
- Line up on the court when the bell rings
- Walk over to the highschool
- Into the old gym
- Wait for our coach
- Start training and warm ups
- Game: finding positions, getting bibs, choosing the right spaces, Sonnie says, Coach says,
This is the start of my writing.
3/9
Fun Friday super sports it's now over. But now I'm going to tell you all about it. We have winter sports on Sunny Fridays when it is dry with all the other schools in our cluster.