Kia Ora readers,
My name is Malama and today I am going to be sharing my narrative writing.
For narrative writing there was 6 boxes we had to write a story I added 3 characters They were Temera Tori and Malama I was Malama but I was a story teller. We had to write a story in each of them but we had to add language features.
One of the language features I used was a metaphor. A metaphor means that a person is like something else like you are tree or a sun. But my line was that " Temera was kicking Tori like a wild cat".
Another language feature I used was a Dialogue I said "GET HER GET HER HAND SHES A STRONG ONE!! " Tori said. The reason why I said it was a dialogue because someone is saying something.
I have not finished my story I only got to do my plans but I will be sure I will get it finish and post it when I have time.
But now I am going to be sharing my Narrative writing enjoy readers.


I loved this story Malama! It made me laugh and gasp in shock at what the characters were doing. I really loved the twist at the end with the other packet of Takis.
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